tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7983822052824018511.post3704804849411605718..comments2023-04-25T20:46:53.176-04:00Comments on Suzanne Giesemann's "Messages of Hope": Poem #61 - As Close as Your HeartUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7983822052824018511.post-61358590008872379062009-09-07T19:45:29.706-04:002009-09-07T19:45:29.706-04:00Poetry and this poem have moved up the ladder. Mo...Poetry and this poem have moved up the ladder. More complex thought, more philosophical questioning, much better structure. I find myself wanting a period (.) to end thought, rather the complexity of no stop. I am sure punctuation isn't provided to you but inserted by you. Comma's are inconsistent and periods nonexistent. I realize that this is automatic writing and you don't have a background in poetry. The penultimate line is an eye grabber as is the line, "Less is more and more is less".Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03573300104696567386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7983822052824018511.post-17009047033987170842009-09-07T10:08:33.509-04:002009-09-07T10:08:33.509-04:00"Look inside and find the way." Today&#..."Look inside and find the way." Today's message speaks to each of us beautifully. Letting go of stress and finding true peace is something we all desire, but it is never easy. Obviously, the Spirit World knows us well. We are one with the Divine..."so look inside, look not afar."Lois Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15419727527324508763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7983822052824018511.post-63424832231340716242009-09-07T10:03:33.917-04:002009-09-07T10:03:33.917-04:00This is so beautiful!This is so beautiful!Janbobblyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01237969014683161371noreply@blogger.com